
Why your sales page isn’t selling and how to fix it in under an hour.
Pssst: your sales page isn’t broken. It just needs a few smart edits to start selling.
You’ve got the offer. You’ve got the sales page.
But your buy button? Collecting crickets.
You don’t need to burn it down and start again.
You need to edit it better—with the help of someone who’s written and fixed hundreds of high-converting sales pages over the past decade.
I’ll show you exactly how to make the words you already have start doing what they were supposed to do all along:
SELL.
What you’ll walk away with
✅ A sales page that finally sounds like you and sells
✅ 4 high-impact edits you can apply in under an hour
✅ Buyer clarity that drives conversion
✅ Before-and-after examples
✅ No fluff. No full rewrites. Just fixes that work.

$100k+ per year
“I went from struggling to sell my course to making $100,000+ every year for the past three years since Elizabeth wrote my sales page"
~ Jessica Tutton, Past Client
What if 4 tiny edits could make people actually buy?
Most sales pages don’t need to be rewritten.
They need to be rewired to convert.
That’s what Sales Page Makeover is for.
It’s a short, punchy course that teaches you the 4 edits that instantly increase conversions—without rewriting from scratch.
You’ll learn how to:
✅ Speak to your buyer’s actual thoughts, not your expert brain
✅ Inject personality that sticks (and sells)
✅ Tell tiny stories that make people feel—then buy
✅ Make your copy sound fresh, clear, and unskippable
Sales Page Makeover
The fast & focused course to turn your almost-there sales page into one that actually sells.
What’s included:
The 4 high-converting edits that fix what’s actually wrong with your sales page—without starting from scratch.
Bite-sized video trainings for each edit, showing you exactly how to apply them (with real examples and before/afters).
The Sales Page Makeover Checklist to apply each edit with clarity and confidence, minus the guesswork.
Here’s what you’ll learn inside Sales Page Makeover
YOUR BUYERS VOICE
Stop writing from your expert brain and start writing from your buyer’s perspective.
Learn how to mirror their thoughts, feelings, and language so your sales page makes them say:
"This is exactly what I need."
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PERSUADE WITH PERSONALITY
Add flavor, charm, and character to your copy—without losing credibility.
You’ll learn how to write like a real human (you), not a boring robot, and become the only obvious choice in your niche.
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SHOW, DON’T TELL
This lesson teaches you how to use mini-stories, snapshots, and micro-moments that bring your copy to life—and turn emotions into conversions.
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THAT FRESHLY BAKED FIX
Goodbye, generic. Hello, scroll-stopping.
In this lesson, you’ll clean up clunky sentences, drop in fresh metaphors, and punch up your copy so it’s specific, skimmable, and impossible to ignore.
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JOIN NOW
One Single
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$27
4 short, high-impact video lessons—each one teaches a single edit that can instantly boost conversions without rewriting your entire page.
Before & after examples so you can see exactly how to apply each edit to your own copy.
The Sales Page Makeover Checklist to guide you through applying all 4 edits—so you’re not left second-guessing or stuck in “tweak mode.”
Lifetime access so you can revisit the course every time your sales page needs a glow-up.
Your sales page, finally doing its job: getting you paid.
All sales are final.
This is for you if:
✔ You’ve already got a sales page
✔ You know something’s not working
✔ You don’t want to waste weeks rewriting the whole thing
✔ You want a fast, proven fix that actually works
This is for you even if:
❓ You’re not “a good writer”
❓ You’ve already hired a copywriter
❓ You’re not totally sure what’s wrong
❓ You’ve tried editing it before and nothing worked
This isn’t theory. It’s action.
Because your sales page has one job—to make you money.
Let’s make sure it’s doing that.
ABOUT YOUR COACH
HI! I’M ELIZABETH MCKENZIE
I’M YOUR SALES PAGE EXPERT
I just took a DNA test, turns out I'm 100% that sales page bitch.
For real though, I've got 10 years of experience in sales and messaging strategy under my belt.
I’ve helped clients make multiple 6-figures from their sales page, pull off quarter-million-dollar launches, and set up evergreen funnels that sell in their sleep.
Also, I played the violin at Hugh Jackman's wedding. I'm practically Wolverine royalty ⚔️

Most profitable launch
“With our new sales page written by Elizabeth, we had our most successful launch to date, shattering our previous records.
~ Sarah, Happy Gym, Previous Client
FAQ
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It’s a short, punchy mini course that teaches you 4 conversion-boosting edits to apply to your existing sales page. Each edit is taught in its own video (with examples), and you’ll get a one-page checklist to help you implement.
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Forever. Plus, you get access to all updates
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This isn’t a deep-dive into copy theory. It’s a fast, focused fix. You won’t learn how to write from scratch—you’ll learn how to make what you’ve already written way more effective. Less overwhelm, more sales.
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Yep. This course is for people who already have a sales page and know it’s not quite doing the job. If you're starting from scratch, check out The Writing Room instead.
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No. But there is an opportunity to purchase a sales page review for a fraction of the cost
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You can watch all 4 lessons in under an hour. Then you’ll apply the edits to your page using the checklist. You could makeover your sales page in one afternoon—and actually feel good about i
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Yep. As soon as you check out, you’ll get immediate access to the course and checklist. No waiting, no drip content. Dive in whenever you’re ready.
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Yes. You don’t need to be a professional copywriter. These edits are designed to be simple, specific, and easy to implement. And honestly? They’re the exact things most pro writers miss.
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Yes. Even great pages can be better. These edits will help you tighten, clarify, and optimize what you’ve got—so you’re not leaving money on the table.
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Because this is a digital product with instant access, all sales are final. But if you actually go through the lessons and apply the checklist, you’ll see exactly why it’s worth every cent (and then some).
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